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…i am in love….

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…with the concept of love,

the abstraction of love,

the essence of love,

and the formlessness of love.

 

i love  no person or thing,

but feel love’s surges within,

which makes me love all,

persons, things et.al.

 

love transcends in stages,

in particular to none to all,

i see my reflection in all,

and all reflected within me.

 

at times its scary,

to see the scars of humanity,

in the tryst between love and scars,

i hope love will finally prevail.

 

2 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    Interesting view
    Maybe the poem needs refining but that might just be my reading
    May I suggest as the final line – I hope love above all soars?
    Fergus

  2. Vikas says:

    Thank you, Gion…missed reading your comments earlier. I believe a poem just the capturing of the feelings at a particular consciousness-space-time and is not akin to word-smithery. If a poem is not liked by someone, the limitation of the poem is due to it failing to first capture and then evoke a universal experience.

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