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YOUNGEST

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English Poetry

“Welcome youngman!”
A tender voice invited me.
“So feminine…!” I thought.
Didn’t try to turn my head
and said “I’m old, very old!”
I guess she laughed…
“You’re the youngest
in our world!!”

6 Comments

  1. kusum says:

    Is this about re-birth?
    Old man taking birth as a baby?
    That is what I surmise.
    I may be wrong.
    Thought is cryptically put forth in brief lines.
    Touch of subtle humour too.
    Kusum.

  2. anuradha says:

    Dear Kusum, this’s about death…at the gates of heaven…

  3. ULHAS says:

    Didn’t understand.

    May be just a flow of words……..poem ?

    But nice set of words, nice paragraph.

  4. anuradha says:

    Dear Ullas, an old man dies and goes to heaven. At heaven he is a newborn. Here in this poem the angel is welcoming the new citizen into heaven saying you’re the youngest.

  5. Vishvnand says:

    (Y)..Elegant & very lovingly impacting indeed, vitamin for those feeling old
    At the door of the other world you are an entry as new & young, never old …! 🙂
    Hearty commends for the excellent take …!

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