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ऐ जिंदगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा …! (Geet)

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ऐ जिंदगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा …!

जाने कहाँ था जाना, जाने कहाँ गया आ
ऐ जिन्दगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा ….!

जिनसे थी चाही दोस्ती क्यूँ गैर बन गए हैं
मतलब के ही रहे सब जिन्हें तूने पास लाया
ऐ जिन्दगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा ….!

दिल तो मेरा वही है, तूने बदल है डाला
अब डर रहा हूँ खुद से जब प्यार सामे आया
ऐ जिन्दगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा ….!

कैसे करूँ भरोसा, जो ठोकरें हैं खाईं
गिर गिर सम्हल के अब तो है अंत पास आया
ऐ जिन्दगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा ….!

फिर भी दुआ हूँ देता तूने साथ तो निभाया
गर ना निभी है दोस्ती कुछ सच समझ तो आया
ऐ जिन्दगी मुझे तू क्यूँ दे रही है धोखा ….!

                                       ” विश्वनंद “

11 Comments

  1. s n singh says:

    badi tuti futi bhasha me jazbaat ka izhaar hai, saame hai ya samne kuchh main samajh n paya

    • Vishvnand says:

      bahut shukriyaa geet par aapkaa kuch to comment aayaa
      rahii baat samajhane kii to geet aur kavitaa me phark
      aapko khud b khud bhale dhiire dhiire par jaroor samajh aa jaaye,
      aisaa chaah rahaa ….! 🙂

  2. sushil sarna says:

    फिर भी दुआ हूँ देता तूने साथ तो निभाया
    गर ना निभी है दोस्ती कुछ सच समझ तो आया….ati sundr bhaav…sundr aur manbhavan geet ke liye haardik badhaaee SIR jee

    • Vishvnand says:

      Sushil ji, aapaa ye prashansaatmak comment mere liye bahut protsaahan aur pyaar le aayaa
      aapke comment kii raah main iseeliye takataa, aapko meraa tahe dil se shukriyaa ….!

  3. P4PoetryP4Praveen says:

    आपने है ये गीत…बहुत ही अच्छा गाया… 🙂

  4. rohanrathod says:

    it’s a good song. liked it a lot.
    however, i feel that there is much more that the song can explore, in the sense that “गर ना निभी है दोस्ती कुछ सच समझ तो आया” after the wonderful romantic beginning is retreating into reason to console oneself. they might work wonderfully separately in separate works but together they cancel each other out. that’s what i think.

    • Vishvnand says:

      Thank you very much indeed for your appreciation of the song & more so for your taking trouble to comment on your feelings on the last stanza of the song as you went along with the song & its meaning & sentiments till its occurrence in the song. You have a very valid point and it was possible that the last stanza could have concluded very differently conveying different sentiments. And that is the beauty of such simple songs that one can align with the song & alter/refine any particular stanza to covey the sentiments & mood that one feels more appropriate at that time. I am thinking whether I can modify the last stanza to something different & more appropriate than the existing as the concluding stanza.

      My mood & sentiments in the last stanza when the song emerged & got composed were to just reconcile with & bless Zindagi in spite of everything for the simple reason that it did keep me company through out though not like a loving friend & because I did learn & experience some truth due to it …!
      Thank you so much once again for your comment….!

      • rohanrathod says:

        well thank you for your response to my comment.i have realized lately that i did the same with many of my poems, i would open something up and would get anxious to close it at some point, so i switched to a circular progression so i could leave it open eternally. i understand that it is possible to align different meanings, but it is just something that i still feel.
        anyways it is a good song, formally well composed and sung. keep it up sir.

  5. parminder says:

    Really enjoyed the geet. The last stanza certainly pulls .

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