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  1. Vishvnand says:

    sundar rachanaa bahu man bhaaii mile hai sur ko sur
    मन भींगा बारिश बूंदों से फिर हम क्यों मजबूर
    chaahat detii kabhii n raahat samaadhaan to door…. !

  2. SN says:

    vibhinn panktiyon ka taartamya samajh n paya. aur jaha cha vaha rah to jahan chaah vahaan raah hona chahiye tha.dusri line me thak ki punaravritti anavashyak aur khatknevali hai. jab chain kh gaya aur nain pathra gaye to fir taaron ki tim tim aur chaand ka bharpoorpan kaise dekh rahi hain aur ye virodhabhasi sthiti bhi khatkne vali hai.man agr bheenga hai to mazboor kyon nahin ho sakta? kabhi bheengi billi nahin dekhi!

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