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A Farewell in the apocalyptic times

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English Poetry

see you soon, if we survive these times!

see you soon, if the world does not collapse!

see you soon, if the laughter persists!

see you soon, if my soul does not take over!

see you soon, if we cross paths again!

see you soon, if the moon does not burn my heart!

see you soon, if the storm dries away!

see you soon, if life does not give away!

© Copyright Hitesh Thukral 2013
*This poem is intended to depict the farewell in the wake of a physical as well as emotional apocalypse *

4 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    Hitesh,
    nice.
    There is a depth to the seemingly plain lines.
    Ending and departures have such great impact,
    Fergus

    • Hitesh says:

      Thank you for your encouraging words sir
      Please do tell if the kind of format I am using of late is ok , or should I try be more typical?

  2. Vishvnand says:

    See you soon, rise high as a poet
    if you continue with such passion honing your talent…

    Liked the poem immensely

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