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JUST ANOTHER DAY!
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It is a bright and beautiful new morning,
Time speeds with a casual warning .
Mark its moves on fast horse hooves.
Life is a carpet woven with memories in plenty,
since the age of ten and twenty.
My life , this flagrant ,fascinating affair
laden with travails, troubles and cares.
Yet every morning the sun wakes for me ,
and every evening,with my worries struts and flees.
Then the moon comes out to scan
and covers an entire life span.
Some fires have died ,some sparks refuse to die,
Poetry, you held my wanton sighs. .
So many fireflies yet to chase,
and let’s keep a steady pace. .
O God ! by your abiding presence
mark my days with inspiring essence ,
eloquence and elegance.
So eventful and yet ‘Just another day’.
Then the moon comes out to scan…life span. These lines stand out.
fascinating style and full of profound meeting.
Right in the morning, reading this poem
has been a delighting experience
And it’s like an assurance
that following won’t be just another day
but a day of lot of meaning & essence
“O God ! by your abiding presence
mark my days with inspiring essence ,
eloquence and elegance.” ….
Outstanding indeed are these lines in context
in their meaning intensely magnificent
Hearty Kudos
Beautiful thoughts very beautifully presented! Excellent and apt comparisons and rhyming. A masterpiece indeed!
Sarala,
beautiful imagery -
“Some fires have died ,some sparks refuse to die,
Poetry, you held my wanton sighs. .
So many fireflies yet to chase,
and let’s keep a steady pace. . “
Fine composition straight from the heart.
Beautiful choice of words balanced with deep emotive content.
Last stanza,and concluding lines with alliterative rhythm are most impressive.
Kusum
Beautiful and inspiring,Sarala.
A beautiful composition, inspiring, cajoling, guiding, to move forward. Like everyday, even this will pass! And poetry, yes, always the sponge to absorb our feelings.
Very very beautiful!!