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गणतंत्र: एक दिन बनाम हर दिन

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Hindi Poetry

सारे अपना अपना गिरेबान
झांक लें तो दिखे संविधान
क्या वो सचमुच ही एक सा
सबके लिए है एक समान
पूरी तरह सच क्या हर कोई
गणतंत्र का है करता सम्मान
एक परेड होश की होती रहे
आत्मा न देश की दुखती रहे
रख सके तिरंगा ऊंची कमान
तब तक ऐ अवामे हिन्दुस्तान
सारे अपना अपना गिरेबान
झांक लें तो दिखे संविधान

4 Comments

  1. SN says:

    expected a better narration and style from you,

  2. Reetesh Sabr says:

    sir sorry to disappoint you..but it was an honest expression that came this morning without ofcourse not deepest of thought or craft or longevity.

    would keep in mind and try to do better ahead.

    happy republic day!

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Bahut sundar rachanaa hai aur sadbhaavanaa
    bahut Jaroori hai sajjanon ne aatmpariikshan karanaa
    Jo kar rahe hain kaaphii had tak desh ke padhe likhe naagrik aur gyaanii sajjan
    Par jab raaj karate chune hue netaa hii ho gaye bhrasht aur karen ghatiyaa kushaasan
    to atmpariikshan hii sujhaataa hai inko ukhaad phenko karo ab aisaa teevr jan aandolan
    Aur kyaa rastaa hai aapke paas bataaiye laane Desh me ik laayak aur sawatcch sushaasan

    Rachanaa ke liye badhaaii

  4. Reetesh Sabr says:

    dada..aapne ekdum sateek vichaar svayam hee rakh diya hai. meri rachna ki pankti keh rahi hai ki girebaan mein jhaankne aur hosh mein khud ko aankne kee hee zaroorat hai. koi netratav kuchh prerna de saka hai par kriyanvan toh vyaktik star pe hee ho sakta hai.

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