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Doomsday??

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English Poetry


To all my p4poetry friends & foes
Dooms day 2morrow, God knows
If its true, then consider this “Bye”
If we survive, its another plain “Hi”

I am as confused as you all are
Was counting days, now every hour
And if we really hear the final bell
Adieu friends, we shall all meet in hell………..

8 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Nice poem. God is on our side & heaven is our place not hell
    The doom has passed of & we are where we are & well
    It will be always so, not we the dooms will go to hell :)

  2. vijay says:

    hahahah… heaven or hell kisney dekha
    I thought if I went to heaven, I would be alone as all my friends would head for hell
    but now that you say so, heaven it shall be Sir

  3. RAMAN LAL RANIGA says:

    THERE NEVER IS A DOOMSDAY
    HEAVEN IS IN YOUR HEART BHAGWAAN PRAANA SHAKTI IS WITH YOU
    LISTEN YOUR HEART NOT MIND
    HELL IS YOUR DEEMAAGH MISLEADING TO CREATE HELL FOR YOUR ATMA
    ATMA IS SHEKHCHALLEEE

  4. Vishvnand says:

    Vijay,
    What the hell you are saying ?.
    Even if it is hell & we are all together how can it continue as hell, it would automatically be heaven not hell, and this is what I want to mean & tell…oh hell !! :)

    • vijay says:

      Ramlalji..heaven n hell koi do alag jagah nahee hain as i understand. wo is dharti pe hee hain, hamari is zindagi mey hee hain. it is what we make of this life that decides hum swarg mey ya nark mey hain. all this navtanki about end of world made me write a few lines in jest sir.

    • vijay says:

      Sirji, and as
      well well well
      heaven or hell
      when v all r together
      & as you tell
      time will b swell
      when v hear d bell
      n we all really gel
      let d world go to hellllll

  5. Gion Gion says:

    Vijay nice one.

    Indians to the left of me
    Indians to the right
    Heaven above me
    Hell below
    Yet p4poetry
    Is still ago

    Best wishes to all the p4poetry community
    Gion Gion

  6. vijay says:

    LOLL Gion Gion
    Friends to the left
    Friends to the right
    Heaven or hell who cares
    Its them that make things bright

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