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little innocent heart

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English Poetry

we tossed it up…
saw it soaring high…
flying ..to our lullaby…
whirling in the wind..
cards where ours
when water spilled
as if i was dreaming…
sky was an empty canvas..
racing was my heart..
your hiccup
my wings were chopped
that once flew. dropped ….
broke apart…
and lay purple on the ground…
and from there
we carried on..
bruised to separation…!

6 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Indeed , from elation to desperation
    Innocence is not long lasting
    Beautiful poem though hurting
    Liked immensely
    Commends

  2. viju says:

    Beautiful, though sad

  3. sonal goswami says:

    @vishvnand ji thank you so much…and yes it has a tragic end… :(

  4. sonal goswami says:

    @viju thanks a lot .. :) :)

  5. amit478874 says:

    Looks like an honest attempt..! Well written but still need a bit of improvement in presentation. rest is best…!! :)

  6. sonal goswami says:

    @amit thank you for the comments.. :)

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