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Just a verse

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English Poetry

If you are the Sun
I am a sunflower
If you are time
I am just an hour

If you are the wind
I am its fragrance
If you are a prayer
I am, reverence

If you are morning
I am a drop of dew
If you are an angel
I am closest to you

If you are a heart
I am its every beat
If you are the fire
I am its imbibed heat

If you are gods blessing
I can never be a curse
If you are a poem
I am just a little verse

12 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Beauty of a poem
    Very elegantly penned
    Liked immensely
    commends

    If you are a verse
    I want to be in it a word
    enjoying your artistry …. 🙂

  2. vijay says:

    Sirji
    If you are my guru
    I am your chela
    with you besides
    i will never be akela

    if you are the word
    I am plain abc
    if you are an ocean
    i am just a sea

  3. Bhavesh says:

    aa poem bahu saras che…

  4. vijay says:

    Haha Bhavesh
    Tamey e poem pasand avi gayee, hun khush thai gau 🙂

  5. sushma kapoor says:

    excellent expression to show your love. Liked the simplicity of the words chosen , so that people of all the ages can relate to this wonderful poem. It also shows the simplicity of a sublime heart. . . . too good

    • vijay says:

      Everything good in nature is simple. its man who has complicated things for himself n spun a web around our lives.
      Appreciate ur comments

  6. kusum says:

    I admire your humility & modesty.
    ‘angle – perhaps you mean ‘angel’.
    Kusum

  7. Hi
    If Iam the poem,why do you want to be a little verse?
    Be my stanzas and reap a bonanza.
    Good one , well done .
    sarala

  8. Apurva Bharat Gaglani says:

    lovely poem, liked it very much.

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