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The Fall

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English Poetry, Jun 2012 Contest

The Fall

The wind that blows
Is very dry
The water that flows
Is very cold

The weather is chill
And the sun up the hill
Is not as warm
In these days of winter

The trees have shed
Their lovely leaves
And have turned barren
Yet the optimist believes
Very strongly and hopes
For the arrival of the spring

The climate is cold and chilly
The trees refuse their shelter
During these days
As they kindly tell the people
“Soak in the cold winter sun
It is not that hot
But quite a good fun”
Thus the trees refuse shelter
By shedding their myriad leaves

5 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Good appreciation of Fall
    Nice simple poem overall

  2. siddha nath singh says:

    garmi me sardi kee baaten ajab lagin kya gazab lagin.

  3. U.M.Sahai says:

    Good one.

  4. Simple style ,easy flow…….good attempt!
    Good to know you……..
    Regards
    Moot Malini

  5. Apurva Bharat Gaglani says:

    Thank you all for your meaningful comments.

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