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Days of Blues….

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English Poetry

Days of blues….

Days of blues
Alone I feel
Without anyone
Without desire
Except desire to be
With someone…

I am so far from my love
That it feels even incorrect to remember her ….

3 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    Very powerful closing lines to a poem of confused emotion and yearning.
    The brevity and directness make up for the discarding of most formalism.
    Is is short but has great depth of feeling.

  2. Ulhas Kavle says:

    Sorry, didnt look like a poem.

    May be a good statement with good feeling – not a poem

  3. sonal goswami says:

    very touchy…

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