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English Poetry, Feb 2012 Contest

Lost in thought
he sailed the boat slowly
through the pompous
river flowing vigorously.

Watched over his head
in the sky, the flight of
a flock of birds with
fluttering wings, at times, bringing
close to the river water
pecking fish in their beaks
one by one to have a grand feast.

Got excited at the sight
of glistening water gushing
through the huge heap of rocks
and his mind squandered.

Got thrilled while looking
at the twigs and green leaves
moving along with the flow
of water in the heavily blowing wind
and in rhythmic waves, while sailing.

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6 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful poem in different unique style
    Takes you along to enjoying enticing rowing environment and their thoughts
    Hearty commends

  2. kanchana says:

    Nice imagery ,enjoyed reading till the end.

  3. sonal goswami says:

    beautiful poem..liked the imagery…:)

  4. medhini says:

    Vishvji,Kanchana & Sonal;
    Highly grateful for your great
    comments.

  5. Nice lines on the birds,
    The river, the rocks
    And the green
    With a flowing melody
    In a steady stream

  6. medhini says:

    Thanks a lot for your delightful
    comments, Apurva.

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