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still i love u

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English Poetry

still i feel for her…. still my heart beat for her…. still i cry in night… still i fight with me all day…. still i see her along myside…still i dream her as life….. despite she told me ….that she hates me….still i love her …………………… ………..though time has ended for me… still i wait for u

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  1. i dont know that will i be ever able to feel ok without my love….. but i pray that atleast she reads my poems for her……

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Ajay,
    within is retained a classic style and feel of romantic poetry.
    The language and presentation might be improved.
    Fergus

  3. @Gion Gion,

    Gion
    U know, I write when my heart overflows with emotions… joy or sorrow….
    I write to express inexpressible… I m not a refined poet… neither I know anything about rules or history of poetry… Not because I m illiterate but because I never had appetite for them, also I never got time to make a appetite…. classical feel in my poems comes then because things are rather classical with me dude …. I have noticed that u are among very few here who read my poems .. so thanks for that … I also felt that u r having a insight of heart , of emotions which lacks in many… I like u for that …i felt like taking u so I wrote this….
    Tc

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