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Romantic rain

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Anthology 2013 Entries, Crowned Poem, English Poetry

It was music, this subtle sound
A serenity, rhythmic joy abound
Pit a pat on the eaves t’was rain
My emotions lent free, no refrain

Tickling the fresh duranta leafs
In sync, as though the piano keys
Natures orchestra just playing out
Heaven this was, without doubt

The varied hues of blissful green
Countryside, a sight to be seen
Velvet moss on rocks, as ferns smile
Kaleidoscopic scene, mile after mile.

Romance the flavor of this season
Heart beats faster, needs no reason
Rainy days, a treat to be aware
When God is out with life giving ware.

24 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Very beautifully penned
    Liked the presentation, poem & the feel immensely

    Sing, dance,
    get wet galore
    make merry in rain
    till your hearts core
    the season isn’t over yet
    there’s time some more

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Viju,
    well written.
    The revitalizing power of rain comes through for earth and imagination.
    “It was music, this subtle sound!,
    Fergus

  3. sonal goswami says:

    awesome…:)

  4. renukakkar says:

    haa, the poem is very good indeed
    but the question answers session afterwards
    with vishvnand ji was a treat 🙂

  5. kavita bhakoo says:

    So well written.You are too good to pen down your heart and soul in the poetry.

  6. rajdeep says:

    Tickling the fresh duranta leafs
    In sync, as though the piano keys
    Natures orchestra just playing out
    Heaven this was, without doubt.
    very nice imagery
    loved the poem

    • vijay says:

      @rajdeep,

      Rajdeep, this was something that I actually saw happen. Rain falling on the garden Duranta hedge did give the impression as tho’ they are the keys of a piano.
      Thx

  7. medhini says:

    Excellent work, Viju.

  8. This is going to be in the list of my favorite poems…….

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