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Romantic rain
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Anthology 2013 Entries, Crowned Poem, English Poetry |
It was music, this subtle sound
A serenity, rhythmic joy abound
Pit a pat on the eaves t’was rain
My emotions lent free, no refrain
Tickling the fresh duranta leafs
In sync, as though the piano keys
Natures orchestra just playing out
Heaven this was, without doubt
The varied hues of blissful green
Countryside, a sight to be seen
Velvet moss on rocks, as ferns smile
Kaleidoscopic scene, mile after mile.
Romance the flavor of this season
Heart beats faster, needs no reason
Rainy days, a treat to be aware
When God is out with life giving ware.
Very beautifully penned
Liked the presentation, poem & the feel immensely
Sing, dance,
get wet galore
make merry in rain
till your hearts core
the season isn’t over yet
there’s time some more
@Vishvnand,
Absolutely …sing & dance in the rain without a care in this world & a weekend too add to the masti :))))))))))))))
@viju.
You both can and please do.
I have an embargo from high command, what to do? 🙁
So I vividly imagine & enjoy which is like real too. 🙂
@Vishvnand,
Oh Sirji , thats not done
beg high command- just one
lets get wet & have some fun
before its hot, the harsh sun
@viju
don’t tempt me again
I can beg, but sure she will rain…!
Wisdom it is to refrain…
@Vishvnand,
dont just sit
gather your wit
all u have to do
is try and woo
@vijay
lets talk about this
when meet we will
Now lets’ worry about
“Jan Lokpal Bill” ….!
@Vishvnand,
meet , we will
to discuss the bill
but romance dont kill
lets talk of your DIL
@vijay
It is you now who
should be telling about your dil
At p4poetry I have already
spilled quite a lot of my dil … 🙂
@Vishvnand,
ye DIL mangey more sirji
Viju,
well written.
The revitalizing power of rain comes through for earth and imagination.
“It was music, this subtle sound!,
Fergus
@Gion Gion,
ur comments r music to my ears 🙂
awesome…:)
@sonal goswami,
Thanks a ton Sonal
haa, the poem is very good indeed
but the question answers session afterwards
with vishvnand ji was a treat 🙂
@renukakkar,
The poem was good
Q/A session a treat
what to do Renuji
Vishwanandji is so sweet
So well written.You are too good to pen down your heart and soul in the poetry.
@kavita bhakoo,
Its in d air Kavita n a little goes to d heart n a little to d brain 🙂
Tickling the fresh duranta leafs
In sync, as though the piano keys
Natures orchestra just playing out
Heaven this was, without doubt.
very nice imagery
loved the poem
@rajdeep,
Rajdeep, this was something that I actually saw happen. Rain falling on the garden Duranta hedge did give the impression as tho’ they are the keys of a piano.
Thx
Excellent work, Viju.
@medhini,
Thank u so much
This is going to be in the list of my favorite poems…….
@Vikas Tripathi,
i am honoured Vikas