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sometimes fear is seed

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English Poetry

When you start to hear
a heart beating fast or slow
first time you may feel fear
that you will never know
how to notice; how to hear
& to make it more clear

then gradually it sounds good
& you feel you understood
it is good for you & i congratulate
that you enterred first gate
still a lot to go & lot to learn

so next time we meet
tell me to have a seat

4 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Nice one but where is fear.
    Next time you come near
    I may leave my seat dear…. ::-)

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Ajay,
    interesting. Reads like a sonnet. There is a nice feeling to the expression.
    “so next time we meet
    tell me to have a seat”
    The second verse sounds like a video game – getting through a gate to collect a heart 🙂
    Just one point – “enterred” change to (entered)

  3. ULHAS says:

    hahahahahahha………….. nice little poem……….Liked it……

    For thought and poem = 8/10

  4. good Bt Heart beat se dar ni lagta.’ Tell me to have seat’. Ye line ni samjh aai

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