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“Birth On The Earth”

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English Poetry

“Birth On The Earth”

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Luckiest we are to be existent on this Holy Earth,

So we must revere Her even if we leave Her Girth!

The Sun being Her Guardian nevertheless adorable,

His consumed energy is simultaneously restorable!

In the Solar System, nine planets orbit around Him,

But none else than the Earth bears a life-living vim!

Our earth is hence a unique globe for all living lives,

Where there is human who optimistically survives! 

Human birth on the Earth is a special manifestation,

By Divine Pleasure apropos of past-life inculcation!

Human-life can only distinguish between bad or good,

So as to prosper well preserving benevolent manhood!

It is a gifted chance to pray God to achieve salvation,

In order to free the life-boat from tiresome navigation!

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10 Comments

  1. Yes indeed, it is a gifted chance to ensure this life to be the last one and not to take birth again. Nice one, this poem.

  2. aniruddha234 says:

    I liked this line,
    “So we must revere Her even if we leave Her Girth!”
    Overall, a splendid composition. Enjoyed reading it.

  3. sonal goswami says:

    “Human birth on the Earth is a special manifestation,
    By Divine Pleasure apropos of past-life inculcation!”
    i really liked these two lines..

  4. ULHAS says:

    I thought it was a good science story. Poem could have been better

    For science – 10/10

    For poem – 6/10

    • ashwini kumar goswami says:

      @ULHAS,
      Oh! It’s so blissful to see you come again on this ground
      after a long gap ! Can I know where and why for this ?
      Thanks a lot for your nifty observations !

  5. Gion Gion says:

    Ashwini,
    “Human birth on the Earth is a special manifestation,” – I like this,
    Fergus

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