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Drawn to the candles

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Apr 2011 Contest, English Poetry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lines of candles lit

A tiny gift of dedicated effort

eyes feast for this night

majestic and regal this fleet

 

A tiny gift of dedication

carries the numerous hopes within

Of the heart that lit them in succession….

tiny carriers of hope into the tomorrow herein!

 

Eyes feast for the night

Wishes of the loving heart it mirrors

On the oily surface light

Misty, mystic,dancing moods , errors

 

Majestic regal this fleet

Steering emotions light

A magic in its vicinity does create

Promising future hopeful and bright!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

3 Comments

  1. saurabh says:

    Misty, mystic,dancing moods , errors
    Amazing!

  2. medhini says:

    Very lovely,Medhini.

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Nice poem and writing art
    Not found easy to interpret
    without a hint of any sort….

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