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English Poetry

When mere two lines hold meaning
When thoughts transcend into feelings
When the conversations are mere farce
I realise you are…..so far

When two of us are alone
When i yearn to be owned
When there appear invisible scars
I realise, you are

When i breathe
When moments cease
When there is calm
I realise, i am

9 Comments

  1. Hi
    A nice one , suggest you replace’ seize’ with ‘cease’.
    sarala

  2. saurabh says:

    After this, I think I must get checked for OCD(obsessive compulsive disorder).

    When two of us are alone
    When I yearn to be owned
    When there appear, invisible scars
    I realise, you are

    When I breathe
    When moments seize
    When there is calm
    I realise, I am

  3. saurabh says:

    When there appear invisible scars
    I realise you are

    I realise I am

    Of all the isms, I love existentialism!

  4. Parespeare says:

    a beautiful poem
    nice flow

  5. medhini says:

    A beautiful verse,Preethi.

  6. Vishvnand says:

    Very beautiful poem indeed
    Liked immensely

    This makes us realize “yes You are”
    now here with your new nice poem at site
    though we did not know for quite some time your whereabouts

  7. dhananjay says:

    a very nice read….

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