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LOVE AND PAIN GO HAND IN HAND?

SHE

She sat pensive in muse free;

Her special scalpel in hand when;

Her palate became her Poetry

The scalpel her pen;

Colors  vibrant  splashed

Friends and foes slashed

 

Aloof and centered

In  wedlock , in love

Her steps were speculative wed

To her eternal purpose olive;

Not; livid with the almighty lord

Not liking to think of him as an eternal fraud!!

 

“No; not possible!” said her loving heart;

He could not ever have one such default

She was an imaginative person

She was derailing ;empty her mind vault

“No! said, her forever loving heart

No!  he would only her try to outsmart!”

 

The rain pelted ; heeding not!

This damsel in her starchy robes

Starch washed away with whatnot!

Leaving her transparent to probes

She withstood all her insults

Mental torture and insolent assaults

 

Love; is sometimes patient acceptance too

The woman in true love ever so few!

starry; starry nights

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

 

 

 

3 Comments

  1. medhini says:

    Beautiful poem,Malini.

  2. parminder says:

    Wow, beautiful! The pain reflects clearly. The silent sufferings minus the accusations all pictured so well.

  3. Gion Gion says:

    Fáilte ar ais.
    Malini,
    we had to learn that song at school. It would have been better if we had poetry such as this to read. Plenty of lines to quote, great imagery. The feelings come across as raw.
    “She was derailing” – wonderful idea. To what extent is this the result of taking the wrong track or just chance?
    “Colors vibrant splashed
    Friends and foes slashed”
    ………
    “Not; livid with the almighty lord
    Not liking to think of him as an eternal fraud!!”
    ………
    “The rain pelted ; heeding not!
    This damsel in her starchy robes
    Starch washed away with whatnot!
    Leaving her transparent to probes”

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