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Kiss.

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English Poetry, Uncategorized

My moustache tickles her skin.
Her shoulders,
Her neck,
I kiss…

To her every breath,
Each beat of her heart,
I rise and fall,
In her embrace….

©Copyright Fergus Carty 2011

8 Comments

  1. Gion Gion
    A vivid imagery ,saying so much with so few words .you have Kept It Short and Sweet.
    sarala

  2. sonal goswami says:

    so crisp and perfect..

  3. priyal says:

    “I rise and fall,
    In her embrace…”
    beautiful ~

  4. Just short 8 lines, but the way they are written, it is just lovely.

  5. Vishvnand says:

    Lovely elegant guide & live imagery of a kiss
    One can still try if he feels he has as yet missed.
    Liked immensely
    Hearty commends

  6. ~HIRAL~ says:

    short but expressing it all…. Loved it 🙂

  7. purabi says:

    beautiful.vivacious!
    the romantic poem came as a shocker but would love to read more such posts.

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