1. SARALA says:

    I felt nostalgia …. I saw patterns and liked the lines …”. Like a giraffe’s neck as they stretch along the footpath ”
    The flow is smooth.The pictorial aid complements the poem.
    A short, sweet but power packed one..

    • Gion Gion says:

      Thank you Sarala,
      When I took this photo I had the seeds of several poems in my mind.
      Glad you liked it.
      Throw down a stone and hop and jump back through the past,

  2. anubhab says:

    touching… thank you fergus, for putting us in touch with our emotions from the past…

  3. medhini says:

    This poem is very much lovely,Fergus.
    Some memories are nostalgic and take
    us to a serene sentimental world and
    the background picture adds beauty
    to the poem.

  4. ~HIRAL~ says:

    i just loved it gion… The feelings and the picture… Feels like hopping into it this scorching summer 🙂
    And congratulations for 200th poem… Long way to go… 🙂

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