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Anti Corruption
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Apr 2011 Contest, English Poetry |
Tell me guys…
Are we so coward !!,
Or we have no shame..!!!
Do we really care,
To ever take this blame ?,
We have adapted ourselves,
So well, in this corrupted place,
That vicious cycle moves on,
But we lack the guts to face…
We say “corruption chokes”,
Then why do we breathe it ?,
We say “corruption kills”,
Then why do we breed it ?,
Corruption helps,
To set the culprits free,
It blindfolds the law,
& still we shamely see,
It widens the gap,
Of poor and rich,
Still we continue the same,
Without any hitch… ?
Somehow i feel…
Our coward mind has,
Hurled down his brain,
Come what may,
Even let our money drain…
And this has become,
Our way of life…
To adjust, without showing,
the signs of strife
And so we just keep moving on,
Without a break to re-think, Re-construct, and reform our Corrugated minds…
Is it that no business runs without it ?,
Or is it that who’s gonna care !!!,
Dont you wanna put an end to it.. ?
Or is it that you dont dare !!!
Many questions in these little brain, And almost all unanswered….
Hope to find answers soon….
So please support those,
Who have tried/attempted to erode it from roots,
Some greatones like Anna Hazare.
If any problem contact to
Director,
Anti Corruption Bureau, Maharashtra,
1st Floor, Madhu Industrial Estate,
Pandurang Budhakar Marg,
Worli, Mumbai 400 013
Tel: +91- 22 – 2492 1212
By fellow mumbaikar,
Hiral Soni 
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very good one
Liked immensely.
From corruption having presently become a way of life in India we have to revolt to drive corruption out of the way of life of polity & people of India, and the movement of driving the corruption and corrupt people way out from life in India is no less a struggle than the struggle that was for our Swaraj
@Vishvnand, thank you sir for your complements
good poem..i liked..the bakashish aspect servives from the british india company dayshasbecome bigger and bigger..the bakashis seekers are now sitting at top most levels along with politicians…they are never satisfied with little bakashish…corruption is from the top and perculated downwards….yes good politicians and bureaucrats are also there but very few in number…
@renukakkar, thank you maam…
very well said, in plain simple words. kudos
@viju, thank you viju
Congrats for this praiseworthy presentation deserving 4* * * * at
the least ! However, I wish you read my parallel English poem
“Re-toasting stale cakes” posted of late and ink observations !
@ashwini kumar goswami, thank u so much for ur compliments
Hiral,
the style is great for the topic. The questions never let up, they keep on coming. The tone is inclusive, collective – it is our problem, affects us all, what are we going to do about it where big and small?
“We say corruption chokes,
Then why we breathe it ?,
We say corruption kills,
Then why we breed it ?,” – a good working of (breathe and breed)
This line is outstanding -
“And move on, Without a break to re-think, Re-construct, and reform our Corrugated minds…” – Corrugated – undulating, uneven, bent, rumpled, crooked, distorted and looks similar to Corruption – brilliant choice of word,
Fergus
@Gion Gion, Thank you soooo much fergus… For ur appreciating words and the compliments…
It’s jus outta d wrld…!!! Awesm… N reely true..!!!
@Manya, hey thank u so much maanyaaa
amazing poem i luv this poem
@mennu, hey thank you so much
hey hiral..that one of the amazing inspiring poem f urs
keep it up….
n make us proud of our friend
@yuvraj, thanx buddy
it is really nice to read a poem full of enthusiasm like this. hope this will make people a more aware…
plz fight against CORRUPTION…
@Sakshi, thank you sakshi
i like it very much as it has much sense
@muskan mehra, thank you sooo much muskaan
acchi poem thi yar mujhe skul me poem submit karani thi maine yehi de di nd i got a1 thnx!!!
@ananya srivastava, Oh! thats great buddy… I feel so happy dat my poem scored u A1
such an awesome poem which inspired us a lot …………………..
@sumbul raza, Thank you so much sumbul raza… Lets get together to remove it from the roots…
nic poem based on reality
@nidhi, hey thanx nidhi
very very inspiring poem . I will make my son recite this poem for recitation competition in school. don’t ever quit. continue writing such inspirational poetries in future
@Dr. Garima Jain, Thank you so much Doc. Garima.. Its really pleasure to hear this praiseful words from u.. It makes me feel so happy.. An artist just needs a pat on his back and he can do wonders..
thank u once again.. And i am sure ur son wud score A1 in recitation competition.. 
Good work Keep it up!!!
@Dr. Garima Jain, thanks maam.. U really inspired me to write more
thanx a ton 