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Dream Away!!!

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English Poetry
Endlessly walking down the road
Tired feet & battered Soul
there is no direction to where it goes
Cause everyone takes a different road
Treading along the path of life
You meet sometimes a Phantom so live
Phantasm of deciet
Leads you deep ,
Into the willows
of enchanted Dreams
Immersed in pleasure
and filled with Vain
You slight for a while
The Real Pain.
Dreams And Illutions
is where you want to stay,
Spell on you will eventually
break someday.
Till then Oh! being just Dream away
Just Dream Away!!!

4 Comments

  1. SARALA says:

    Hi
    The post reads well. Everyone meets a phantom in his life but the fear of the phantom has to be worked away . I think you mean “illusions ” in line 15 .
    .Nice one , just organise the lines .
    regards
    sarala

  2. parminder says:

    Dreams And Illusions
    is where you want to stay,
    Lovely! Ah well, had it been so easy we would all be residing in different worlds! Alas, reality has to be faced. Very nice, keep it up!

  3. Gion Gion says:

    Rattan,
    “You slight for a while
    The Real Pain.” – nice.
    Just a suggestion to use the spell checker to catch typos like “deciet” – deceit ,
    Fergus

  4. Vishvnand says:

    Very nice poem of pondering
    Liked very much
    so also the comments/suggestions towards betterment for everyone.

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