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At 13th Feb on Valentine …..!

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At 13th Feb on Valentine …..!

You were then my sweet Valentine,
And I was desperate to make you mine,
Now when you are already mine,
Why are you not my Valentine?
And I am wasting precious time,
In search of another Valentine…..

This is the story of
“Mad for each other”,
Believing they were
“Made for each other”,
Now “mad at each other”
Slowly drifting apart,
Creating distance
Between each other…..!

At its approach lovers lose their cool
Valentine Day is a day made to fool
Precious money from lovers they loot
To those who profit, a wonderful tool

“ Vishvnand ”

9 Comments

  1. Harish Chandra Lohumi says:

    Mad for each other are now sad to each other,
    may this Valentine return their happiness,
    May they be Glad to each other ! 🙂
    Congrats Sir ! Happy Valentine Day 🙂

  2. purabi says:

    great one sir!!!!!!!!!!!
    u just gave us a piece of smile so rare these days…
    wish u a happy valentines’ day in advance!

  3. sweet and lovely , happy valentine day sir

  4. Vishvnand says:

    At the time of writing 13 have read the posting, 3 have commented and only 1 has rated the poem so far.

  5. Gion Gion says:

    Vishvnand,
    read, rated and now commenting.
    I liked these verses.
    “Mad for each other,
    Made for each other.
    Mad at each other. – as love grows older, love grows colder 🙂
    Gion

    • Vishvnand says:

      @Gion Gion
      Thank you very much for the comment.

      Some years back there used to be an elaborate contest program on TV called ” Made for Each other”. The funny thing was that a little while later we would invariably come to know that the winning pair had got divorced. 🙂

      I am again going to post a reminder appeal in Hindi as also in English for members not to forget to rate the read poems they understand, as their duty.

      It is intriguing & interesting that some members who complain that there is inadequate response to their poems from members are also the ones who themselves don’t seem to be reading rating & commenting on other author’s poems and their activity is confined to posting their own poems and thanking readers who have commented on their poems.

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