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Nature Heals

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Crowned Poem, English Poetry

The cold water,
washes away my tears,
if i am lonely,
i speak, and the trees hear……

if i am silent,
birds teach me to talk again,
and the winds,
blow away my pain……

the golden sun,
tells me its a new day,
the soft breeze,
frisks my fears away…..

the smell of wet soil,
gives me a feeling of delight,
the shades of trees,
shelter me from the scorching sunlight…..

the sun rays, gold,
wake me up every morning,
and the sea-stones,so cold,
comfort me after a day’s scorning….

there is silence,
all around me,
i can’t hear anything,
but, there is a lot to see…

i look at the mountains, high,
when i am low,
i turn to mother nature,
when i don’t know where to go….

the seeds teach me,
how to grow and fight,
the changing seasons teach me,
that changes are alright.

nature is all around us,
teaches us a million things, still we don’t care…
one day, when none of it will exist,
there will be no one to heal us, we will just stand and stare……..

8 Comments

  1. dp says:

    Good one ..

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Maitreyee,
    very impressive, style, structure. The choice of rhyming scheme give a flexibility for expression of the theme. Nice personalized but realistic imagery and a sound expression of ideas.
    Gion
    “there is silence,
    all around me,
    i can’t hear anything,
    but, there is a lot to see…” –

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful indeed and commends
    totally second Gion Gion comment.
    keep it up

  4. medhini says:

    Excellent poem,Maithraeyee.

  5. parminder says:

    Very beautiful and mature! The words and the imagery are so realistic. Keep it up!

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