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English Poetry

First it was your unfamiliarity
That sent shivers down my spine
The oddness of the first conversation
Until, another place or time

And perhaps a new discovery
of you and me
or me and you
together

in breaths
and shivers
we found us.

6 Comments

  1. neeraj guru says:

    It;s wonderful in last wordings.nice expressions.

  2. nitin_shukla14 says:

    We get very few opportunities to read & enjoy your Poems…..(U can yourself see a long gap of May to Nov )
    Its really awesome..
    Congrats…
    And Very Happy Deepawali..

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Nice one liked it.

    We feel we have found us
    But have we,
    & can we ever…?

  4. medhini says:

    A beautiful piece, Preeti. Can we
    really find ourselves?

  5. Gion Gion says:

    “Until, another place or time

    And perhaps a new discovery” – a journey.
    Gion

  6. prachi sandeep singla says:

    nice one but after a long gap ?why…..!!!

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