« »

A Woman’s Beauty

2 votes, average: 3.50 out of 52 votes, average: 3.50 out of 52 votes, average: 3.50 out of 52 votes, average: 3.50 out of 52 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5
Loading...
English Poetry

Your beauty …
like serenity of nature
Your simplicity…
Like blueness of lake
Your eyes…
reveal the depth of truth

When you smile
flowers blossom
When you walk
Rivers flow
When you untie your hair
The sky is clouded
When tears roll down your cheeks
It rains

Words fall short
to describe your magic spell

3 Comments

  1. Tushar Mandge says:

    shanu ji,nice poem presenting woman as a special gift of nature….

  2. Parespeare says:

    very well written with a nice flow.
    lovely comparison to nature

  3. Gion Gion says:

    Shanu,
    I like the move from passive to active in the imagery.
    The second verse is indeed stunning.
    “magical” – the word seems so small but contains the multitude of experiences found difficult to word,
    Gion

Leave a Reply