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ode to ma lord

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English Poetry

i dnt knw am lucky or nt
am cursed or nt
a dnt no..
i do itself
or its due to u

my lord
when even we talk
when ever we feel
i got buried
but lost my mortality
to u again
and against the time

the power of light
is so far
i just saw the red
and when am in
light
nothing is right
am gentle but u
take me to the
fight

i ask you once
you gave me thrice
of my death
twice of bluff
and just one of my life

i need more
glory more
some time more
some life more and more

more colors to fill
more baits to live
more world to see

its my pyre
but am nt there
its my hood
but you make me
numb i cant stood

hell i missed
death i kissed
its nt so funny
alone i hissed

dnt gamble with me
my lord
you r gambler
n gambling all i knw

ths time it take
the fun
you and i both
sound
bullet and the gun
am more curious
than u knw
am the one
who will nt run

is it the problem
i dnt fell
or i am still well

i ask you

6 Comments

  1. ajay tripathi says:

    this poem i state here is nt written by me but one of my friend named NEERAJ SHARMA

    so please also help me to find new dimensions of this poem as he dnt tell wt it is all about!

    • Vishvnand says:

      @ajay tripathi
      You can only post your own poems here.
      It is highly incorrect to post any one else’s poem here even if he may be your friend. If your friend wants to post his poem(s) he should register and post the poem as written by him.
      Please do read the rules and don’t do things like this.

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  2. dp says:

    ye it is the measure prblem.

    The goel is undefined.
    the gain is confused,
    the demand is incomplete,
    the supply is excused.

    the friend might re-think,
    what has he written,
    friend’s friend is advised,
    to follow the don”t care condition.

    Cheers !!!!!

  3. prachi sandeep singla says:

    ur friend has written dis poem from a veryyy deep corner of his heart…i appreciate it 🙂 itz really nice

  4. Vishvnand says:

    You can only post your own poems here.
    It is highly incorrect to post any one else’s poem here even if he may be your friend. If your friend wants to post his poem(s) he should register and post the poem as written by him.
    Please do read the rules and don’t do things like this.

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