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English Poetry |
A bubble of an ideal,
Smiling, dancing, mocking…
I turned stone…
And the bubble froze in mid-air.
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effects, motion, thrust, dynamism…
obliterating the causes…
My legs turned jelly,
But with a thrust of will,
I grabbed my only possession,
But a bubble, is a bubble, is a bubble…
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darwin’s mutilated soul…
got mutated into a whole…
I was left with an identity…
An individuality I wanted to rub humanity…
They looked agape at me…
Confused, lost, unsure, frustrated…
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inflation took another leap…
and lo…unemployment soared simultaneously…
I tied humanity with a rope,
And gave it a godly push,
It ran amok, not tangentially…
Isn’t space and time still linear?
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he walked with the fetus within…
and was groaning, yelling, weeping during the labor…
“Behold, I love you”. They grinned.
“I am thy messiah”. They frowned.
“I am thy hitler”. They abused.
“Pray, I am thy humble servant”. They obeyed.
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hatred shook hatred, love challenged love…
and the stillness was more dynamic than motion…
I peeped beyond the horizon,
With a bubble of a hope…
Of synthesizing into a whole…
The punctured bubble of humanity.
****** Vikas Rai Bhatnagar******
hi vikas, all 4 poems are beautifully expressed.well done…n keep going
@sudha,
thanks so much sudha….have read few of your poems…very intense and straight from the bottom of heart…regards, vikas.
thanks so much sudha…have read few of your poems…very intense and looking forward to more poems from you…rgds, vikas.
good one vikas 🙂
Vikas,
a very interesting and at times challenging read. I like the way the lines are broken up.
“effects, motion, thrust, dynamics…
obliterating the causes…” – nice lines and the references to linear time and space, peeping beyond the horizon.
Gion
@Gion Gion,
Thanks Gion…regards, vikas.
Vikas, its rally interesting…………………….your poem has a different style and a nice approach…………………I really liked it
Congrats to you on writing such a nice poem……………….
Stars = 5……………..Have added to my Favorites……………………….
@ULHAS,
thanks so much for your appreciation…warm regards, vikas.