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Unforgettable

3 votes, average: 4.33 out of 53 votes, average: 4.33 out of 53 votes, average: 4.33 out of 53 votes, average: 4.33 out of 53 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5
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English Poetry

A silent face, soft glances,

Beauty surpassing senses,

Should I write a painting,

Or paint a picturesqe poetry?

    The tempest within, complacency without,

    Seldom speaks, yet communicates,

    Laddened eyes, pale with ambitions,

    Containing surging, ebbing emotions.

Neither disdain, nor desire,

But the will to live life,

She breathes not air,

But the very wine of life

****** Vikas Rai Bhatnagar*****

15 Comments

  1. medhini says:

    Beautiful poem,VikasR.B

  2. ashwini kumar goswami says:

    Nice one for 4-stars at least !

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
    Liked very much.
    Hearty welcome to you at p4poetry

    • Vikas Rai Bhatnagar says:

      @Vishvnand,

      Thanks so much Vishvanandji for the appreciation and for welcoming me to p4poetry…am sure the journey would be enriching…

  4. siddhanathsingh says:

    beautiful imagery and attractive style of narration.

  5. prachi sandeep singla says:

    welcm 2 p4 vikas wid dis lovely poem,,,keep sharing 🙂

  6. ulhas.kavle says:

    Style hein bhai…………..beautiful………………………………really good………….

    Stars = 5

    • Vikas Rai Bhatnagar says:

      @ulhas.kavle,
      Hi Ulhas…thanks for the appreciation. If by my definition, “a poem is just a transfered epithet of the poetry by the poet”…a thought that resonates with your poem “Who Wrote this Poem” (read today)…the style and beauty of the poem will fade into triviality had you seen the actual poetry that nature created…many thanks for appreciating my humble attempt to capture the poetry that already exists in nature in the fewer dimensions that words lend us…regards, vikas.

  7. vmjain says:

    Beautiful and strong beginning. Expect good ones in future too. Writing in hindi is not diificult. If not anything else, go to google/transliterate/indic.

    • Vikas Rai Bhatnagar says:

      @vmjain,

      Thanks Vijay for the tip and the appreciation…have posted one titled “roshni”…hope you find time to read it. I see you have interest in urdu couplets…great. tks again and regards, vikas.

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