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Pores

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English Poetry

The pores-sticky and vulnerable
The clouds aching to burst
You were distant.

The winds took flight
In an unstirring night
-It rained a while.

Droplets.Drenched;
Seeped Through-
To You.

The Night was balmy
The wind died calmly
With me.

You live-d
In the pores
of me.

13 Comments

  1. rajdeep says:

    amazing
    loved it

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Preeti,
    a wonderful write that seems to drips away to nothing.
    Starts with such an image that speaks of the “aching” need for communication, physical, verbal, emotional…with who? looking round the One is distant…on the other side of the room or the other side of the world? it does not matter.
    Welcome back to posting,
    Gion

  3. Seema says:

    Captivating and spell binding!

  4. medhini says:

    A lovely poem, Preeti. Liked it.

  5. Raj says:

    Beautiful and deep. Really touching.

  6. Vishvnand says:

    Intensity invaded
    poem “Pores” is profound
    Liked immensely
    commends

  7. Niks says:

    Hey Preeti,
    Reading your poem after a long time….this ones nice…conveys a feeling of immense passion and longing…! Like it!
    Regards,
    Niks

  8. U.M.Sahai says:

    What a beautiful poem, Preeti, specially these lines:
    Droplets.Drenched;
    Seeped Through-
    To You.
    because
    You live-d
    In the pores
    of me.
    Simply fantastic. Congrats.

  9. sushil sarna says:

    last 3 lines are the essence of the poem-a poem with a deep emotions- liked very much-congrats

  10. parminder says:

    Fabulous!

  11. Preeti Datar says:

    Thanks everyone. Yes, trying to get back to writing 🙂

  12. karnav says:

    now ur talking 😉

  13. karnav says:

    now ur taking 😉

    “The winds took flight
    In an unstirring night”
    “The Night was balmy
    The wind died calmly”

    ur poem took a flight and landed smoothly

    hoping more of such good stuff !

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