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Water
Important state of matter
Is polluted
And depleted
We feed plastic into river
Still it is a giver
The waste of industry
Made water scarcity
Conserve water
Else miss her
Start conserving water
Otherwise you will be left with an quarter
hi Ojaswy ji, App to paani ke baare me bahut acha likha hai.
All the best
thankyou bharathji
Welcome to p4poetry with this poem.
The idea of the poem is good
The meaning of last sentence of the poem is unclear and needs improvement.
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@Vishvnand,
Ojaswy,
I second Vishvnand comments.
“an quarter” – correct to “a quarter”. Is this to mean we will be left with only a quarter of the water we have now?
The poem could be fleshed a bit with imagery,
Gion
its nice !!! but 2 short for me. u r a good poet . keep it up !!!
what is mean by quarter
I share your opinion for the large part, I believe that
some points are worth using a more comprehensive appearance to
comprehend what is going on.