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water pollution and conservation

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Water
Important state of matter
Is polluted
And depleted
We feed plastic into river
Still it is a giver
The waste of industry
Made water scarcity
Conserve water
Else miss her
Start conserving water
Otherwise you will be left with an quarter

7 Comments

  1. Bharatshyam says:

    hi Ojaswy ji, App to paani ke baare me bahut acha likha hai.
    All the best

  2. ojaswy akella says:

    thankyou bharathji

  3. Vishvnand says:

    Welcome to p4poetry with this poem.
    The idea of the poem is good
    The meaning of last sentence of the poem is unclear and needs improvement.
    Please do also let us know something more about yourself in your profile

    • Gion Gion says:

      @Vishvnand,
      Ojaswy,
      I second Vishvnand comments.
      “an quarter” – correct to “a quarter”. Is this to mean we will be left with only a quarter of the water we have now?
      The poem could be fleshed a bit with imagery,
      Gion

  4. srishti says:

    its nice !!! but 2 short for me. u r a good poet . keep it up !!!

  5. do not know says:

    what is mean by quarter

  6. Ricketts says:

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