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Born to………

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Born to………

Born to live, not to die,
Born to conquer, not to cry.
Born to survive and to thrive,
Born to help, not to deprive.
Born to win and be brave,
Born to succeed and not grave.
Live to enjoy bade not bye,
For every new say hi.
Love all serve all,
Remember your court has the ball.

7 Comments

  1. Madhavi says:

    bagundi ra…

  2. Gion Gion says:

    Yashaswy,
    good attempt, some nice sentiments.
    “Born to succeed and not grave.” – repetition of lines of 1 and 5.
    “Live to enjoy bad not bye, – should this read “bid”?
    For every new say hi. – ??
    Love all serve all, – good
    Remember your court has the ball. – good.
    Gion

  3. ULHAS says:

    good………..One grammatical error is fine and sure you will correct…………Gion is good at that.

    Nice keep writting……….

    Stars = 4

  4. parminder says:

    Nice, specially the last line!

  5. Shrenik says:

    excellent… nice rhyme and that too with meaning… really i enjoyed to read it..

  6. Radhika says:

    mmmmm good message to all of us

  7. Aruna says:

    Hi yashaswy.. good one!!!

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