The thinkers ….!
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They were alone & in love,
He said “Why do you appear so lost”
She said “I am Thinking”
He “What are you thinking”
She “I am thinking about what you may be thinking”
“But I think you look very lovely when you are not thinking,
Then why do you have to at all think”
“Yes, most of the time I am not thinking.
I am really happy when I am not thinking
& often enjoy talking without thinking,
But later I regret when I think about what I was talking.
And often land into trouble for having talked without thinking”
“I am different my thinking and talking go on simultaneously.”
“But I think both of us do a lot of unnecessary thinking”
“Why do you think so and can you tell me why thinking is wrong”
“I actually enjoy a lot, thinking & talking about thinking”
So like this they went on thinking & talking, mostly about thinking,
And later on realized they did nothing whole evening,
except thinking and talking about thinking,
without thinking about the time that was passing & had passed.
Finally said she “I think we should now be going”
He responded “You are right, I think.”
—- xxx —
14 Comments
i like the messages in your poems Vishvnandji
-:)
Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 11:03 pm
@Parespeare
Thank you for thinking so.
Hi Viswa nand jee,
I think, you thinking too much makes us all very happy.
Keep this thinking going…
Rachana:-)
Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 11:07 pm
@Rachana
If you think so, I have felt too happy with my thinking, I think.
your thinking is very true.pl keep on thinking,
Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 11:08 pm
@vpshukla
Thank you very much for thinking so.
The message is good, But with all due respect, this poem is not so great. Not your style.
Sorry,
How are you sir, I get not even a minute for P4poetry.
Vishvnand Reply:
February 9th, 2010 at 2:19 pm
@Ulhas Kavle
It is indeed great & a happiness to see your comment at p4poetry after such a long lapse, for we were missing you presence, your poems and your comments at p4poetry very much indeed.
I have already prayed to The Goddess of Poetry to bless you such that you do get inspired to get and devote more time for your passion for poetry, without affecting your important occupation but in the process to remain more effective there too.
Now about your comment on the poem ” The Thinkers….!”, do you really think so?. I think I made a good attempt at it. Nevertheless I will definitely think about why you may be thinking so and improvement, so that next time you think differently about my poems . I hope you will support this thinking of mine. After all, thinking is highly subjective, don’t you think ?.
A nice meaningful poem on true thinking,
meaningless thinking and doing nothing by
thinking unnecessarily for so long,Vishvji.
Vishvnand Reply:
February 9th, 2010 at 4:21 pm
@medhini
Thank you so very much for thinking so and commenting.
Wow Vishvaji I love this poem so different and kept me thinking too 
Vishvnand Reply:
February 9th, 2010 at 5:47 pm
@shalu
Nice to see your comment and think, you are back with a fine poem indeed. Hope you always remain present at the site with your poems and comments..
Retired senior engineering, marketing & operations management Executive with Passion for & deeply interested in reading & listening to all varieties of poetry & songs and in particular those rendered in Hindi/Hindustani. Also interested in & love reciting & rendering my own poems/compositions & songs on various subjects, composing tunes for songs and singing. Love to & adept at playing Harmonium as accompaniment to singing & also as accompaniment to others performing.
.......Location: Pune & Mumbai
So ..so True, people live half their lives thinking what others are thinking….
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Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 11:03 pm
@Vandana Singh Mishra
Thanks . You are absolutely on dot, about this “thinking what others are thinking or may be thinking”.
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