बता तू ही अब इस पर किस तरह लिक्खूं ग़ज़ल प्यारे !

vmjain Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 3:20 pm

@siddhanathsingh, आप निस्संदेह बहुत वज़नदार लिखते है. ख़ास तौर पर ज्वलंत समस्यों पर. बहुत से आपके मूक प्रशंसक भी हैं. किन्तु नए अथवा कम वज़नदार कवियों का हौंसला बढ़ाना भी ज़रूरी है.

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Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 4:39 pm

@siddhanath singh ji
Thank you for your comment and the pertinent observation. The situation is bound to improve.
It has to be appreciated that personal opinion can be very different from public opinion and a poem of any poet one reader thinks as outstanding another may not find so. That is why we here at p4poetry have the facility of giving our personal comment on how we have felt the poem as a feed back to the author. The people with passion for poetry are free to post their poems here and in this atmosphere of encouragement it is expected that feed back/comments are such that while encouraging the members it will also allow them to know where they lack and how they can improve further so that poets improve from fair to good and further towards excellence. You can appreciate, the understanding, duty & responsibility in this regard rests much more with poet members amongst us who are well versed in the art of poetry than the ones who are budding and trying to make a mark; for directing these authors appropriately with their critical appreciation of the poems… I am very hopeful that situation as you have observed would get automatically corrected and improved with better and improved participation and involvement of members as the activity proceeds. Mr vmjain’s comment is also pointing at the same thing.
Please do also go through my post, “Why so ….!” http://p4poetry.com/2010/02/07/why-so-%E2%80%A6/ which is also a matter of concern in similar connection and do convey your observations,

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siddhanathsingh Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 5:44 pm

@Vishvnand, मेरा व्यक्तिगत अनुभव ये है कि जिन कविताओं में कमियां हैं उन्हें कोई सुधि कवि पाठक इंगित नहीं करता है मात्र तारीफ की जाती है जो कदाचित एकांगी एवं प्रतिगामी हो सकती है.i ग़ज़ल लिखने वाले कवि अगर छंद और व्याकरण का ध्यान न दे रहे हों तो उन्हें अतुकांत कविता की कोशिश करनी चाहिए ग़ज़ल का स्वरूप बिगड़ने से दिल को कष्ट होता है.

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Vishvnand Reply:
February 8th, 2010 at 6:35 pm

@siddhanath singh ji
Thank you very much. You are absolutely right.
I have found that the members commenting are basically two types.
(1) Those that know and know that there are basic errors in the poem.
(2) Those that are not so much knowledgeable to find errors, but they comment mostly on how they have individually felt the poem. And this class by and large does not give comment of praise purposefully if they have not liked the poem.
I therefore feel that onus is on the members under (1) to comment on the poems in such a way that the author is made aware of where he needs to correct & improve, at the same time remains encouraged to do better. This is called critical appreciation, and this is what is expected in esteem from all the knowledgeable members at our p4poetry.
I hope I have been able to clarify my personal opinion in this matter and hope you also may find it agreeable for implementation…

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siddha Nath Singh Reply:
February 9th, 2010 at 10:25 am

@Vishvnand, Let us hope others are listening too.

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Vishvnand Reply:
February 9th, 2010 at 10:43 am

@siddha Nath Singh
मैंने इस बारे में आज अभी पोस्ट भी क्या है. http://p4poetry.com/2010/02/09/%E0%A4%B9%E0%A4%AE-%E0%A4%86%E0%A4%97%E0%A5%87-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A5%9D-%E0%A4%B0%E0%A4%B9%E0%A5%87-%E0%A4%B9%E0%A5%88%E0%A4%82-%E2%80%A6/
देखे इस पर अब अपने अन्य मित्र क्या कमेन्ट करते हैं और इस बारे में उनके क्या विचार हैं.

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