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Couplet
Written by renu rakheja at
February 1, 2010 (11:20 am)
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Loading ...The threat looms like a deep shroud
My life fills with dark clouds……
A dear friend who is very good at urdu shayaree translated this couplet of mine and added his own lines which i am penning below…..
गहरे स्याह साए से डराती है ज़िन्दगी
काले बादलो से भर जाती है ज़िंदगी
बुरा वक़्त है
यह भी गुज़र जाएगा
सेहर होगी,मुस्कुरायगी
फिर हसीं हो जायेगी ज़िंदगी
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बहुत परिचित लगता है, वो अपने अन्दर का अजनबी
यही भाव उमड़े पान करके आपकी पंक्तियाँ…
Reetesh Sabr Reply:
February 1st, 2010 at 6:05 pm
अंग्रेज़ी का मूल कप्लेट भी पढ़ाइये! उसका हुस्न ख़ुद में अनूठा होगा 
वाह, क्या बात है,
स्वीकारिये मेरी बंदगी
Really a lovely couplet and equally lovely the Hindi translation & extension
I am water
Sometimes solid...you can always depend on
Sometimes liquid...fits in anywhere
Sometimes vapor...ephemeral...I am there and then I am gone
Sometimes ice...but can be dissolved by fire
Sometimes swirling ....with passion
Sometimes tranquil ....with still desire
Always flowing....unaware of the destination
Sometimes vivid ....like blue sapphire
Always pure....see your reflection
Always rising ...wanting to go higher
http://renunrajsblog.blogspot.com/
All depend on the attitude you have, Renu ji! Hope and positive thinking is the key to succsses in life.
shailesh
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