Out Of The Loop.
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Loading ...I hate being out of the loop!
Cannot jump through another hoop.
Is it feeling alone and low?
Or a question of lying low?
E-mail, mobile, web site and text,
There is nothing left to use next.
Now reeling from a body blow?
Maybe after landing the blow?
Lately with some others grouped?
Or just another one duped?
Feeling my frustration grow,
I just need to be in the know!
7 Comments
A very beautiful & meaningful poem.
We need to know, yes but how much, where to draw the line…
The need to know, which is very advisable is now turned in to greed to know, which is the source of trouble and unrest.
Kudos to you for the poem and the method pf presentation…Great
Thanks Medhini, Anuradha, Vishvnand, Ray, for you kind comments.
Vishvnand,
I have a headache from the flu and it helped a bit to get these lines refined and written,
Gion
Whenever possible I buy blank greeting cards and write my own messages. It always feels good to create from my heart. I believe poetry is all around, in every thing and action and spontaneous speech. Renewed by the human spirit's appreciation of beauty and goodness. There is no unchanging standard that can reside in perfection in books rarely read.
I am a husband and father of 2. Starting to write down before forgetting.
Know what I like when I've read it, trying to get to grips with photography.
Gentleman of leisure, not uneducated, all spelling and grammar errors I lay upon my eyesight.
A nice poem with beautiful
presentation, Gion. Liked
it very much.
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