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नहीं तेरी पूजा का मोहताज मालिक
न एहसान जता उसका दीपक जला कर
हैं सांसें तेरे जिस्म में उसकी बदौलत
कर शुक्रिया उसका अपने सर को झुका कर
नहीं तेरी पूजा का मोहताज मालिक……
हो सके तो भला कर तूँ हाथों से अपने
तेरे हाथ से टूटें किसी के न सपने
दुआओं से लोगों की तूँ भर झोली अपनी
न कर कर्म मैले किसी के दिल को दुखा कर
नहीं तेरी पूजा का मोहताज मालिक….
हर एक हाल पर तेरे उसकी नजर है
वो दाता है सबका उसे सबकी फिक्र है
मूरत पत्थर की है पर वो पत्थर नहीं है
नहीं खाली आता उसके दर पर कोई जाकर
नहीं तेरी पूजा का मोहताज मालिक
न एहसान जता उसका दीपक जला कर, उसका दीपक जला कर…..
सुशील सरना
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“नहीं तेरी पूजा का मोहताज मालिक”
आपनी आराधना का अलग द्रष्टि से पहचान कराने वाली सुन्दर रचना. बहुत उपयुक्त, अर्थपूर्ण और मनभावन.
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sushil sarna Reply:
January 10th, 2010 at 2:02 pm
@Vishvnand,
Thanks you understood the root and also thanks for appreciation sir jee
bahut hi khoobsurat rachna sir, prabhu ki sacchi bhakti ki ek raah ko khoobsurat shbdon se dikhaaya hai aapne
sushil sarna Reply:
January 10th, 2010 at 2:03 pm
@abhijit_shukla,
Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your favourable comments Shukla ji
Bahut sunder,
Agar ise awaj miljati to kya bat hoti ..badhai sir jee
sushil sarna Reply:
January 10th, 2010 at 2:04 pm
@Ravi Rajbhar,
Many Many thanks for such a nice appreciation, Ravi ji
My full name is Sushil Sarna and date of birth is 2nd August,1951. I belong to Punjabi culture. I have cleared Graduation in 1970. I am serving in Central Goverment Service. My wife is my best critic and has has always encouraged me for writing the poems. This sence was developed during my college period. I was always praised for my poems by my friend circle. Later, in my family I was supported for this passion and also in my office. But clearly speaking I never tried to get my poems to be published any where. This site has given me a birth as poet though I still think that I dont know the poetry but after reading the comments, I feel that there are persons who recognise my poetry.
What should I writer more about myself. I am a very simple and nature loving person.A very sentimental person. Sometime I feel tears at the time of making some poetry.This brief introduction.Thanks.
I am a resident of Jaipur-the Pink City.
एक सुंदर भक्ति रचना, बधाई, सरना जी
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sushil sarna Reply:
January 10th, 2010 at 2:01 pm
@U.M.Sahai,
Lot of thnks for appreciation, Sahai ji
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