***छुपा नहीं पाता …..***
Written by sushil sarna at
January 7, 2010 (6:07 pm)
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दिल का
ये प्रेम सफर
शुरू से अंत तक
मूक रहकर भी
सब कुछ कह देता है
कह देता है
अनगिनित तारों से
की हुई
मिलन बातें
जुदाई में गुजारी
विरह की रातें
वो मदहोश
आँखों की
वो मदहोश बातें
वो रूठने मनाने की
चुलबुली मुलाकातें
सच
कुछ भी तो छुपा
नहीं पाता
ये प्रेम
मूक है
कह के भी
सब कुछ
कुछ
कह नहीं पाता
बहुत छुपाता है
नजरों से
जमाने की
मगर
जमाने की नजरों से
खुद को
छुपा नहीं पाता, छुपा नहीं पाता, …..
सुशील सरना
8 Comments
Vah! kya baat hai….
Maja aa gaya…
sushil sarna Reply:
January 8th, 2010 at 3:28 pm
@dr.paliwal,
Many Many thankx for ur appreciation Dr.Sahib
बहुत ही सुंदर और प्रेम की भावना से ओत-प्रोत रचना, बधाई
sushil sarna Reply:
January 8th, 2010 at 3:29 pm
@U.M.Sahai,
Deep thanks from the bottom of my heart for appreciation Sahai jee.
mook ko jubaan denewali rachna wakayee kabile-tareef hai.
sushil sarna Reply:
January 8th, 2010 at 3:30 pm
@c k goswami,
Lot of thanks for such a nice comment sir jee
My full name is Sushil Sarna and date of birth is 2nd August,1951. I belong to Punjabi culture. I have cleared Graduation in 1970. I am serving in Central Goverment Service. My wife is my best critic and has has always encouraged me for writing the poems. This sence was developed during my college period. I was always praised for my poems by my friend circle. Later, in my family I was supported for this passion and also in my office. But clearly speaking I never tried to get my poems to be published any where. This site has given me a birth as poet though I still think that I dont know the poetry but after reading the comments, I feel that there are persons who recognise my poetry.
What should I writer more about myself. I am a very simple and nature loving person.A very sentimental person. Sometime I feel tears at the time of making some poetry.This brief introduction.Thanks.
I am a resident of Jaipur-the Pink City.
सुशिल जी,
बहुत खूबसूरत ये छुपाकर कहने का अंदाज मनभाया ,
आगे क्या इरादा है इसका तो अंदाज छुपा ही रह गया ….
इस सुन्दर रचना के लिए हार्दिक बधाई ..
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sushil sarna Reply:
January 8th, 2010 at 3:28 pm
@Vishvnand,
thanks a lot for your favourable comment sir jee.
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