A heart I seek…
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Loading ...A heart I seek, that is less of the ‘ I ‘
And more of the ‘US’ I want…
In the eternity of searching and all that is giving,
When I am finally so spent..
Of all the giving that I have..
Still I would search for the lack of the ‘ I ‘.
If love were …so easily comeable
As lust were to ‘He’..
Happiness would be mine..forever mine……
©Maitreyee
12 Comments
@dbum, Thank u thats really sweet of u..much appreciated 
Muchacha,
5 stars. Hurt and recovery? Never giving up on love – I like that idea.
In a lighter note reminds me of dialogue from “The Fixer” along the lines -
Girl Q: Do you love me?
Man A: (pause) No, but I’m very much in lust with you.
Gion
@Gion Gion, he he.. guess he finally figured out about the reality of love 
Am new to the site & meeting so many like minded people here is a dream come true.. thax all of u for yr appreciation, goes a long way in doing better work.
@Vishvnand, Its something I feel so deeply about..
@dhananjay, Few people unerstand the artistic lingo & the use of words that have a double meaning but the fact that like minded people understand & appreciate what u feel is a great kick which Im sure u’ll agree too. Thx for going thro all my poems.
Born in Assam, I am a dreamer for whom childhood fatasies have never stopped merging into adult meanderings. Open enough to let the environment shape me, rigid enough to choose just the extremes. Cuddly at times and a passionate at others, life I believe should be lived either like fire or like ice. Lukewarm is not me. Poetry is a passion that comes rather naturally, a true poet is someone I believe for whom the thought process itself is a rhyme. A writer & a mad hatter, the unexpected, simple & humble fascinate me.
I liked both your poems Senoritta. You definitely evoke the sensual, and you paint excellent pictures with your words.
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