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“STORY OF THE GLORRY……”
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Here with the pleasure, Friends…!
I’ll tell you one strory……!
This story is of the person…
Haven’t any glorry……!
He was the person, Who’s very very shy…
But…, he desires to fly; High in the sky……!
He follows the sloggen, “I’ve no time to talk…”
As he has to go; For a long – long walk……!
Once upon a time, he got married…,
But…afterwards; He starts worried……!
He stars worried…, After having a wife…,
As hethinks that…, It’s just begining of the Life……!
Now time starts; To run for money…,
But…Now he has no time; For his honey……!
After a few years, He got one baby…,
Very – very soon; He starts call him daddy……!
Life is now going, Very – very fast…,
The stage of life will come now, Which is very – very last…..!
On the last stage, He gets disappointed…,
As he has no “GLORRY” from the begining till the end……!
From the story of this person, What you’ve learn…?
i.e. Don’t waste your time, Only for money…! To earn……!
There are also other things; Which are very important…,
i.e. to maintain relations, which is leading from the frount……!
-AMIT T. SHAH (M.A.S.)
4 Comments
@Gion Gion, Thanks for advise….But I am not a professional writer so thease kind of mistakes may occure..it is just my hobby to write & Immagine..
Thank u very much…
Agree with Gion Gion….
and Amit, we all have a common hobby, poetry! so each day everyone tries to improve themselves and each other 
Look forward to reading more from you…..
Yes, Preeti jee, u r correct…But actually I’ve no time to concentrate on writing right now as my studies are going on. Even though I find some time to write, only because I like it. I will definately improve in future.
Thank you…for your kind responce…
My self Amit Shah. I am living presently at Ahmedabad while my native is Vyara in South Gujarat. Presently I am doing Chartered Accountants (Final year) and also doing Company Secretary course. I had done with my B.Com. I like to watch and play Cricket. My hobbies are to Traveling, Drawing (Pencil Scratch), Reading, Writing Stories, Shayaries, poems etc. I had also written so many shayaries and 3 stories. I have also made my own blog at http://amit478874.blogspot.com. I had also written some articles on some topics and the same had been published on my blog too. I love to meet new peoples around the world. I never dislike anyone. What I think is that, "Every one have 2 facets. one is bad and the another is best. I always find the best one and follow the good from anyone I meet." There is nothing like SUCCESS & FAILURE but the silly SOCIETY is the biggest BARRIER. My slogan is that, "There are two types of people in the world - One believes in SUCCESS and the other believes in FAILURE. I am from the third category - believing neither in SUCCESS nor in FAILURE." I love everything around me, whether it is my family, my enemy, my friend, my relatives, the nature or myself. No one can dislike me that is not just my belief but its my confidence and its my experience too.
I will be thankful from the deep of my heart to all of them around me who make me feel happy and satisfied for the whole of my life.
Amit,
good idea for the theme but expression needs some work. Spell/grammar checker for a start.
2 things. “Glorry” should be glory and very is for emphasis so repetitions like “long-long” and “very-very” look odd.
Gion
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