Comments on: THE JOURNEY OF LIFE

By: vksridar

vksridar — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 13:09:44 +0000

very superb and non-fictious real journey u have made in this poem.i wish u to be the driver in this journey contest.always first.
Our money and property,
Wont come,till our destination!
To love every moment,like a kid,
To adore,even the foe,
Rather,we must learn,
To smile at the trouble!
I liked these lines too much.which everybody must understood and follow.
all the best in your life

By: Sakthi

Sakthi — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 11:54:01 +0000

Superb poem on our real life.no one can deny any of these lines.loved it very much.

By: R.Aarthika

R.Aarthika — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 08:34:16 +0000

Thanks a lot for your appreciation, ayushi.thank you once again

By: Ayushi

Ayushi — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 08:10:39 +0000

An amazing poem on the fact of our life journey…i think u hav much potential aarthika!…i lik’d these lines v.much
“The most interesting journey,
In which,we don’t know,
What happens in the next moment,
Is nothing,but life!”…..FABULOUS ATTEMPT ….

By: R.Aarthika

R.Aarthika — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 05:21:58 +0000

Thanks for your hearty appreciation..! and for your star too ma’am

By: Rajamani Srinivasan

Rajamani Srinivasan — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 18:59:55 +0000

Aarthika,

Great job. All the best for your entry in the contest. I’ll give you
5 out of 5 rating for this poem, becos it will definitely inspire one and all.

By: R.Aarthika

R.Aarthika — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 10:31:52 +0000

Thank you very much for your liking…..Panku…!

By: panku180

panku180 — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 08:57:51 +0000

great work dear…i like these lines very much…

A TTR,named”God”,
Has given us ticket,
Called “Birth”,
To travel in a train,
Named “Life”,
Only to love and dig every second.
But not to sit in a corner
At tuff times.
Rather,we must learn,
To smile at the trouble!

…keep it up..tc