THE JOURNEY OF LIFE
(3 votes, average: 2.67 out of 5, rated)
Loading ...Once upon a time, 
I was alone on a train journey.
Initially,i felt tough.
But, i sang a song of my own,
To get rid of being alone,
With the aid of my ringtone!
Later,I got a friend,
To love till my end,
Who never allow my heart to bend,
Whom the God has sent!
Then only I realised,
The Journey of life.
It may be too short or long,
We may reach the destination,
Or meet with an accident
In between!
The most interesting journey,
In which,we don’t know,
What happens in the next moment,
Is nothing,but life!
Our money and property,
Wont come,till our destination!
Our eminent laptops and mobiles,
Works better,even without us!
Our beauty and pride,
Dies,even before us.
We must know the magic,
To love every moment,like a kid,
To adore,even the foe,
And to award a pleasingsmile,
For our hardships!
A TTR,named”God”,
Has given us ticket,
Called “Birth”,
To travel in a train,
Named “Life”,
Only to love and dig every second.
But not to sit in a corner
At tuff times.
Rather,we must learn,
To smile at the trouble!
<@rthik@>
8 Comments
Aarthika,
Great job. All the best for your entry in the contest. I’ll give you
5 out of 5 rating for this poem, becos it will definitely inspire one and all.
R.Aarthika Reply:
November 24th, 2009 at 10:51 am
Thanks for your hearty appreciation..! and for your star too ma’am
An amazing poem on the fact of our life journey…i think u hav much potential aarthika!…i lik’d these lines v.much
“The most interesting journey,
In which,we don’t know,
What happens in the next moment,
Is nothing,but life!”…..FABULOUS ATTEMPT ….
R.Aarthika Reply:
November 26th, 2009 at 2:04 pm
Thanks a lot for your appreciation, ayushi.thank you once again
very superb and non-fictious real journey u have made in this poem.i wish u to be the driver in this journey contest.always first.
Our money and property,
Wont come,till our destination!
To love every moment,like a kid,
To adore,even the foe,
Rather,we must learn,
To smile at the trouble!
I liked these lines too much.which everybody must understood and follow.
all the best in your life
Hola! friends...!!i'm aarthika......i am just out of my school life and hav got lots of passion and love towards poems..I really learnt a lot frm u guys..nd think u all as elders of my family and need comments frm u all to get improved further in writing poems..i love Mother Nature and my country a lot .....many of my articles were taken place in regional journals..
great work dear…i like these lines very much…
A TTR,named”God”,
Has given us ticket,
Called “Birth”,
To travel in a train,
Named “Life”,
Only to love and dig every second.
But not to sit in a corner
At tuff times.
Rather,we must learn,
To smile at the trouble!
…keep it up..tc
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R.Aarthika Reply:
November 23rd, 2009 at 4:01 pm
Thank you very much for your liking…..Panku…!
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