Comments on: Journey Into Dust http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/ Passion For Poetry Fri, 12 Mar 2010 16:26:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: dhananjay http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-43067 dhananjay Tue, 17 Nov 2009 19:09:54 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-43067 brilliant.... brilliant….

]]> By: shalu http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-43057 shalu Tue, 17 Nov 2009 07:12:56 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-43057 Gion a mind blowing superb poem! These liens are simply brilliant : This youthful dream-time journey into dust. Forewarned of a journey that is a must. Gion a mind blowing superb poem! These liens are simply brilliant :

This youthful dream-time journey into dust.
Forewarned of a journey that is a must.

]]> By: sangeeta http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-43035 sangeeta Mon, 16 Nov 2009 18:33:40 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-43035 Imagined journey through shifting sand, No destination was known to be at hand. Dust devils filled the mark of each pace And erase all sign of the path I did grace. This youthful dream-time journey into dust. Forewarned of a journey that is a must. Beautiful lines. Seem to hint at the eventual and final journey all must undertake - from dust to dust. Superb! Imagined journey through shifting sand,
No destination was known to be at hand.
Dust devils filled the mark of each pace
And erase all sign of the path I did grace.
This youthful dream-time journey into dust.
Forewarned of a journey that is a must.
Beautiful lines. Seem to hint at the eventual and final journey all must undertake – from dust to dust. Superb!

]]> By: Parespeare http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-43017 Parespeare Mon, 16 Nov 2009 14:34:09 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-43017 liked the poem immensely liked the poem immensely

]]> By: medhini http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-43000 medhini Mon, 16 Nov 2009 06:34:32 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-43000 Congrats for the century take. Congrats for the century take.

]]> By: medhini http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-42994 medhini Mon, 16 Nov 2009 06:15:14 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-42994 A splendid poem, Gion, Liked it. A splendid poem, Gion, Liked it.

]]> By: rajdeep http://p4poetry.com/2009/11/15/journey-into-dust/comment-page-1/#comment-42971 rajdeep Sun, 15 Nov 2009 16:26:12 +0000 http://p4poetry.com/?p=20605#comment-42971 Imagined journey through shifting sand, loved it Imagined journey through shifting sand,

loved it

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