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Wavy Mind

I am going to the beach &
I will never come back to you”
said the effervescent wave to the ocean!
The ocean gave a deep blue smile
and
…………………..stayed quiet.

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Geetha,
a day brightener of a poem. It put a smile on my face and I am still interpreting it in all sorts of ways.
- My wife spotted my little girl leaving the house with a little bundle tied to a stick. “Where are you going?”, “I’m leaving home!”. She watched her to the end of the block, turn around and come home. “Well?”, “I changed my mind”.
Thankx for the post,
Fergus

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The inevitability of that deep blue smile…
Ohh.. brilliant !

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Geetha, this is simply beautiful….
Very elegant poem & a thought so bright.
Ocean was wise hence it kept quiet,
Was not interested in any sort of fight,
Waves always said so, more often than not
But ocean knew, with beach, what was their plight.

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A beautiful poem, highly imaginative, Geetha.

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thanks for the comments :)

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superb

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Geetha Reply:

@rajdeep,
thank u :)

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