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TRUTH IS GOD
Written by R.Aarthika at
November 5, 2009 (5:32 pm)
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Loading ...Hey,Religious Mortal Society !When WATER is poured into a vessel, It adapts to the vessel's surface ! When it is dropped in muddy sand, It gives birth to many greeny plants ! When it falls into the mighty ocean, It forms a new world for those many creatures ! Likewise , When GOD is namaazed by Muslims, They call him Affectionate Allah ! When HE is prayed by Christians, They call him Jubilant Jesus ! When HE is worshipped by Hindus, They call him Righteous Rama ! Though God has many forms, He is only ONE ! Who lives within us, In the form of TRUTH and HONESTY !! By : ^@rthik@^
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Aarthika,
good attempt. Like Ashwini says, some editing reauired,
Gion
R.Aarthika Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 7:39 pm
yes sir, i have corrected those grammar mistakes
Hola! friends...!!i'm aarthika......i am just out of my school life and hav got lots of passion and love towards poems..I really learnt a lot frm u guys..nd think u all as elders of my family and need comments frm u all to get improved further in writing poems..i love Mother Nature and my country a lot .....many of my articles were taken place in regional journals..
A very good write indeed. The gist of the poem takes me back to my
Hindi poem “Bhinn Bhaashee Bhaarat” identical to this take ! If you
don’t mind make a few corrections as follows: “falls” instead of “fells”
in the first stanza; “HONESTY” instead of “HONEST” Iin the last one ?
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R.Aarthika Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 7:17 pm
yes ma’am..i have done the corrections….thanks for ur care on my grammar part..
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Gion Gion Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 7:22 pm
@R.Aarthika, I think you will now have to edit your comment to “Sir”
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