DRIZZLING RAIN

Written by R.Aarthika at

November 5, 2009 (5:15 pm)

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Once on a Cloudy day ,
With the choppy thunder ,
And with the flashing Lightning ,
I saw you …I saw you….

Once on a Muddy day ,
With the sandy scent ,
And with the tapping windows ,
I felt you….I felt you….

But , On a Sunny day ,
With the prickly climate ,
And with the itching sweat ,
I missed you….I missed you….

YOU Drizzling Rain  !
Whenever I feel lonely,
You fell down here,
To cheer me up !

By : *@rthik@*

English Poetry

6 Comments

Comment by Gion Gion on 5 November, 2009 @ 7:19 pm

Aarthika,
very enjoyable. A good expression for the simple things that are the bulk of our lives if we took time to think.
However, drizzle – to each his climate. For me it’s light sun-showers on the way home – then it does not matter how wet I get ;-{)
Gion

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R.Aarthika Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 7:23 pm

Haaah!..than mah poem,your feel for it is very good..anyway,thank you!!

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Comment by Ray on 5 November, 2009 @ 8:59 pm

Good one…. As Gion says for us northern hemisphere types it’s the opposite. Rain oh rain how sad I feel, bring the sun through the clouds to me and my heart will be filled with glee.

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R.Aarthika Reply:
January 30th, 2010 at 8:33 am

Thank you Ray….nice rhyme…!

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Comment by Vishvnand on 6 November, 2009 @ 9:08 am

Nice poem. Liked very much

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R.Aarthika Reply:
January 30th, 2010 at 8:32 am

Thank you lol