GOD’S GIFT
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Loading ...GOD hasn’t given me,
A Magical scale,
To measure your Beauty !
GOD hasn’t donated me,
Wings like a bird,
To fly at your Garden !
GOD hasn’t Granted me,
Horns like a bull,
To knock your enemies down !
GOD hasn’t Awarded me,
Birth like a bee,
To consume your honey smile !
GOD hasn’t provided me,
Birth like eye-lashes,
To protect your stunning eyes !
GOD hasn’t Blessed me,
To come as Rain,
To touch and play with you !
But, GOD has Gifted me,
A Kind Heart,
Only to care about you !
By : @rthik@
13 Comments
A classic poem is this, provided use of verbs and pronouns is set
right grammatically according to “Third Person” and “Second Person”
to make the write alright ! Excuse me, please ! English being exotic
for us all Indians, so we we have to learn it more and more; to intern it
in our hearts and rather not to burn it anyway !
ashwini kumar goswami Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 9:17 pm
@ashwini kumar goswami, PS: Pl.
never mind suggestions, though they may be unpalatable. I may tell
you frankly that even I am yet learning English until my entire satisfaction !
Its amazing how old you sound when you write.. Keep it up sweetheart…
R.Aarthika Reply:
January 13th, 2010 at 1:51 pm
Thank you very much,Buddy…I was 17years,when i wrote this poem…
Hola! friends...!!i'm aarthika......i am just out of my school life and hav got lots of passion and love towards poems..I really learnt a lot frm u guys..nd think u all as elders of my family and need comments frm u all to get improved further in writing poems..i love Mother Nature and my country a lot .....many of my articles were taken place in regional journals..
Lovely, a sweet poem indeed. Good ideas the brightly carry the reader along to the end,
Gion
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R.Aarthika Reply:
November 5th, 2009 at 7:21 pm
very much thanks Gion Sir !….
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